Published by Deborah on 06 Dec 2005 at 10:37 pm
Chapter 11: Finished
This needs some editing and expansion, but I’m going to leave it for now in order to keep moving with the plot. I’m almost at the 50% mark for my 100,000-word goal. Amanda goes to the general store to show the owner the evidence which suggests that the bad deputy raped the owner’s daughter (who is dead). This is not a goodwill gesture, but a tactical move to destroy the deputy before he can destroy her as well as weaken the town’s trust with the sheriff.




















pat kirby on 07 Dec 2005 at 7:29 am #
Woohoo. You go girl! Progress, yay!
Deborah on 07 Dec 2005 at 8:05 am #
Now the fun begins.
Karen Lee Field on 07 Dec 2005 at 2:04 pm #
Sounds exciting. Best of luck with the next chapter.
Deborah on 07 Dec 2005 at 2:13 pm #
Hi, Karen!
I’m brainstorming right now on the best way to start Chapter 12.
Lee Pletzers on 08 Dec 2005 at 7:52 am #
excellent news.
do you edit chapter by chapter or do the whole book first?
Deborah on 08 Dec 2005 at 8:42 am #
Unless I made a big screwup, I like to move forward with the story and edit later.
melly on 11 Dec 2005 at 7:44 am #
Right on!
Sounds like you have a game plan that you’re following well. GOod stuff.
Deborah on 11 Dec 2005 at 10:12 am #
Hi, Melly!
I’m hoping this is the final draft.